Sketchy Song on Saturday: Lonely Man Feat. Ramon Kok

Hello and welcome to the tenth episode of Sketchy Song on Saturday! Sketchy Song on Saturday is a series in which I will be posting a live performance. It will contain a song that isn't a 100% finished. Critique is encouraged, so I can improve the song! I had this riff and no drums, no bass and no vocals. With Ramon I figured out what drums we would use, played them using my piano using MIDI (it sounds better than using a cajon). Wrote lyrics while Ramon was drumming and we recorded everything in one day. Hope you like it :-) lyrics: Take what you can I'm a losing man Afraid of the dark Never seen the light To see a familiar face who puts me in my place I'm a lonely man I'm a lonely man Freezing time, I wish I could do it once Take one last glance at my imperial state The tides have turned I got my fingers burned I will think twice Before I decide I'm a lovely man I'm a lovely man Playing time is over I got nothing to say to you I'm pretty sure nothing is sincerely Do you got proof? Gear: - Ableton - Ibanez Blazer - Blackstar HT1 - Aria Pro II CSB 250 - Fingers and drumsticks Thanks for watching, don't forget to leave us a comment or Like!